Monday, July 15, 2019

Wikipedia Follow-Up Post

Recently, I wrote a post on the blog about a Wikipedia post on superfoods that I decided to edit. I felt that the article needed a bit more information in regards to superfoods that should be consumed on a regular basis. I've decided to check on this Wikipedia entry and see if my edits were still present. 

Here is the unrevised version of the Wikipedia post, which is also the writing that I felt needed to be added to:

Unrevised Wikipedia Post: 

Examples[edit source]The Dutch food safety organization Voedingscentrum noted that the health claims marketers used to sell goji berryhemp seedchia seed, and wheatgrass were not scientifically proven.[15] The organization warned that people who consumed such foods in large quantities may develop an "impaired, one-sided diet".[15]Berries remain under research and do not have evidence of providing any health benefits different from other fresh fruits.[1][16][10] Specifically, blueberries are not especially nutrient dense (a superfood characteristic);[1] they have moderate content of only three essential nutrientsvitamin Cvitamin K, and manganese.[4]


Here is the version of the post with my edits:

Revised Wikipedia Post: 
Examples[edit source]The Dutch food safety organization Voedingscentrum noted that the health claims marketers used to sell goji berryhemp seedchia seed, and wheatgrass were not scientifically proven.[15] The organization warned that people who consumed such foods in large quantities may develop an "impaired, one-sided diet".[15]Berries remain under research and do not have evidence of providing any health benefits different from other fresh fruits.[1][16][10] Specifically, blueberries are not especially nutrient dense (a superfood characteristic);[1] they have moderate content of only three essential nutrientsvitamin Cvitamin K, and manganese.[4]Along with berries and other nutritionally dense foods come the vegetables that should be consumed on a weekly basis in order to keep the body healthy. One of these superfoods is kale, which is a leafy green that is commonly known today as a superfood. Kale is high in nutrients and low in calories, making it vital to diets and reducing health related diseases, such as heart disease.Another superfood necessary in diets today is avocado. Avocado is loaded with healthy monounsaturated fatty acids, which is crucial for heart health and overall weight maintenance. Avocados contain as much potassium as bananas, and are very rich in fiber. Avocados can be eaten to help lower cholesterol, and also help the body to absorb nutrients from other superfoods. 

My edits were deleted from the post, and it is now back to its original state.  I'm not quite sure I understand why my edits would be erased from the post since they were accurate and true facts about superfoods. I'm still baffled that berries are the only superfood listed in this article, and I think that it is misleading to readers who might want to learn more. I personally still think that this article needs more information not only in the "Examples" section, but throughout the whole entry. There isn't nearly enough information present, especially with everything we know about superfoods today.

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